
The Radiant Peace Division
Tenth Annual Peace Education Awards (2000-2001)
National Award Winners
For Entries sent by December 15, 2000
Kindergarten through Third Grades
Theme: How I Make a More Peaceful World
I would make the world more peaceful by going to my moms
at the old folks home. I would help them into their wheelchairs.
I will smile at them to make them smile back.
I would fix them something to eat.
I love the old folks home.
Brittany Washington, 2nd Grade (Age 8)
Port St. Lucie Elementary, Port St. Lucie, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Barbara Greenwood

Getting together with friends,
Gives me happiness that never ends.
Getting together with my sisters,
keeps me from blisters.
Getting together with my neighbors,
We help each other with favors.
Getting together with my pupppies,
Makes me feel lucky.
Alexis Dynneson, 1st Grade (Age 6)
Brorson School, Sidney, MT
Teacher: Cynthia Torgerson

I would make a more peaceful world by being kind,
sharing, and showing respect. Everyone should
be doing their part. By sharing and giving my
toys to others, I show kindness and peace.
Ive learned this from my mom. Sharing and
giving away my toys shows respect to others.
Alaina Seidle, 1st Grade (Age 6)
West Broward Christian School,
Ft. Lauderdale, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Lankheet

Peace
You could have a party with friends.
If you play and have fun you have peace.
Wade McMillen, 1st Grade (Age 7)
Brorson School, Sidney, MT
Teacher: Cynthia Torgerson

If you fight, Thats not right
violence is bad, So dont be mad.
Go out and play, Start today.
Wacey McMillen, 2nd Grade, (Age 8)
Brorson School, Sidney, MT
Teacher: Cynthia Torgerson
Fourth Grade through Eighth Grade
Theme: I am a peacemaker when I...
I am a peacemaker when I do what is right. Being a teenager isnt very easy, with
all of the choices we are forced to make in one day. The choices are endless. As a
peacemaker I am very fortunate to attend a great school. Every day I am surrounded by
peacemakers. These peacemakers have a great influence on me to do what is right. Having
peaceful friends is a positive way to make others peaceful. It is basically a chain
reaction, everyone is affected. A positive way of being a peacemaker is to help others in
their time of despair. Be a friend to someone who has no friends. I am a peacemaker when I
care.
Ariane Christina Swick, 8th Grade (Age 13)
St. Pauls School, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Reed

I am a peacemaker when I think about my actions, words, and reactions. There are
problems that will never be resolved unless I think before I act, speak, or react. My
thoughts may or may not affect others. First, I think things through before I act. It is
not always easy, but it is important. Even then my actions may not be what others think is
best, but it is my actions according to my thoughts. Next, I think about what I say. Words
can be harmful or helpful. Tone and attitude can also affect how what I say is
interpreted. Last, my reactions may be the most difficult and important peacemaker
abilities I have. Sometimes the best reaction is no reaction.
Thoughtlessness can lead to hurt feelings, misunderstandings, or war. Being a
peacemaker is important and it begins with me. Who knows, one day I may change history.
Jason Morris, 8th Grade (Age 13)
Roulhac Middle School, Chipley, FL
Teacher: Patti Davidson

I Am a Peacemaker
I am being a peacemaker by using my wisdom to understand people and staying open-minded
so we can get along. I am being a peacemaker by spreading joy instead of pain and showing
people the dream of peace as a reality. Peace isnt something we can do only
partially. We cannot be friendly one moment and violent the next. We must also be peaceful
in spirit. We will not reach peace just because of the ending of wars. We must also have a
deep understanding and respect for our fellow humans and living creatures. If we want
peace, we must think positively. We strive too much on the suffering of others to make us
feel greater. It is time to break free of this addiction and start using a smile and a
gentle helping hand and bring ever-lasting peace into our lives.
Masatoshi Mochizuki, 8th Grade, (Age 13)
Baypoint Middle School, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Renee OBrien

P.S. 20 has a Conflict Management Program which is run by Mr. Kerne (a sixth grade
teacher). Im one of the conflict managers. As a Conflict Manager I feel like a
peacemaker because I try to help children who are about to fight, and help to resolve
their problem before it turns into an even bigger fight. Since Im a peacemaker, kids
know I will try to make peace between two people. I truly feel good about being a
peacemaker because I love helping out kids and dealing with their problems. Im also
a peacemaker out school. If I see friends argue I try to help them solve it. These have
been ways Ive been a peacemaker. I hope you have enjoyed my composition.
Johan Acosta, 6th Grade (Age 11)
P.S. 20 Anna Silver, New York, NY
Teacher: Mr. Kerne

Imagine. Nothing could be more powerful than the human mind, and I believe I can do
whatever I set my mind to. I also think that by setting a good example for others, I can
slowly help them do the right thing too. Its not always easy to make a hard
decision, but if someone makes the decision first, its much easier to follow in
thier footsteps. I may not be the biggest, most powerful person in my school, but Im
able to persuade people, and make tough decisions, and as far as Im concerned,
thats enough.
Patty Hamilton, 8th Grade, (Age 13)
St. Paul Catholic School, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Reed

A peacemaker is someone who tries to resolve a conflict, argument, or fight. These
problems can arise among individuals, groups, or even nations. I always try to help my
friends find a solution to their problems. I consider myself a peacemaker. I begin by
trying to calm down the opposing parties. Talking about the consequences of their actions
is another tact. I warn of potential physical injury, or the loss of their friendship as
possible side effects. People should not fight and countries should avoid war. These
actions cause pain and suffering, unnecessary bloodshed, and death. An American general
once said, "War is hell." I believe he was wrong. War is worse. There are no
innocent bystanders in Hell. When a fight can be avoided, or an argument suspended, I feel
like I have been able to accomplish something good. Sometimes a fight can result in simply
hurting the feelings of others. This can be just as devastating as physical blows. Verbal
assaults last a long time in the memory of grade-schoolers. I know. I have been the
recipient of such vocal tirades. At times, Ive also found myself dishing out the
abuse and it makes me sad and ashamed that I allowed my temper to get the best of me.
Supporting the reasons not to fight are evident in our everyday lives and current events.
The rash of school shootings are one example. Most of these kids felt picked on and
bullied, until it drove them to commit senseless and tragic acts of violence. Now I try my
best to control my temper, and I try to show kindness when I see someone lash out. I know
they are reacting from their own pain. Small peace, Large peace, World peace. There really
is no difference in these three. We should all be willing set aside personal differences
and petty disagreements to try and make our school, our town, our country, or our world a
better place.
Dylan Dotson, 5th Grade (Age 11)
Woodland Forrest, Tuscaloosa, AL
Teacher: Vanessa Davis

Being a Peacemaker
I am a peacemaker when I help my friends work out their problems peacefully, and when I
do what I think is right. I am a peacemaker when I give others a chance, when I am willing
to accept the peace. When I show others how to be respectful and kind, when I show how we
can all make a difference for world peace, I am a peacemaker. By allowing others to follow
my ways, by being willing to accept the fact that sometimes I may be wrong, just like
anybody else can be, I make peace. You see, being a peacemaker doesnt just mean you
know how to make peace, it means you know when, where and why. It means that you are
always willing to stand up for what you believe in, even if it means standing alone. It
means that you can see past peoples outsides, and look deep into their hearts to
figure out one simple way we are all alike: We all have the power and strength to make
peace in our world.
Brianne Duffy, 4th Grade (Age 10)
Green Valley Elementary, New Albany, IN
Teacher: Barb Bitzergaio

Peacemaker
I am a peacemaker when I dont care about others appearances, race, ethnic
groups etc. This earth would be much better if others could see past the skin, through the
scars and birthmarks, past the ethnic ancestors, and into the heart and soul. The idea of
seeing others as equals, not more than us or less than us would stop many holy wars and
hate crimes. We would have less murder, injuries, and start more friendships. We could do
this by looking past the faces and seeing others through a new light. For one day we could
forget everything we previously knew about every person and instead of classifying them
into the following categories; black, white, Christian, Jewish, Muslim, Buddist, etc. we
should classify them by the way they act. We should view others on their worth as
individuals, not as a group. Maybe, then we could acheive real peace.
Ashley Miller, 8th Grade (Age 13)
Bay Point Middle School, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Mrs. OBrien

I am a Peacemaker when I am on duty as a Conflict Manager. Conflict Managers have to
solve problems that other kids have. Conflict Managers carry clipboards that have the
rules of the program and papers that you write the problem down on, the names of the
disputants classes, and the resolution to the kids problems. But not all
problems are solved by what is written on that clipboard. We have to think about certain
situations before we come to a solution. Every situation is different. We help them all in
different ways. The way we try to help them is by talking to them. We first ask them if
they need any help and if they say no and it doesnt look like a real fight, then we
leave them alone. If they are having a fist fight, then we tell a grown-up that works at
the school to help us handle the situation. I love being a peacemaker. As a Conflict
Manager, I learned that fighting is not the way you solve a problem. The best way to solve
a problem is to talk it out or ask a grown-up to help you. At home I try to adapt all I
have learned working as a Conflict Manager. Being a peacemaker is something I enjoy
practicing wherever I am.
Marc Max Adorno, 6th Grade, (Age 11)
P.S. 20M, New York, NY
Teacher: Mr. Kerne

In this essay you will read why I am a peacemaker, and why I choose to be one. I am a
peacemaker because I am a Conflict Manager. As a Conflict Manager my duty is to walk
through the schoolyard and check if there is a problem. If I do not see a problem, a child
or children might still ask for my help. I chose this job because it helps the teachers do
what they have to do. I also chose this job because it is great to be around kids knowing
that they are getting a lot of help and, having a friendly relationship with us. I am also
a peacemaker because I go upstairs to my class each morning to help my teacher with
anything that has to be done, and I try to help my school in many ways. I try to make each
day a better day. This is why I am a peacemaker.
Niomara Berberena, 6th Grade (Age 11)
P.S. 20, New York, NY
Teacher: Mr. J. Kerne

Peace, Let It Flow
I am a peacemaker when I spread friendship, do nice things for others, and bring peace
to the less fortunate. Let me tell you how I do all of this. I am a peacemaker when I do
nice things for people and keep them in my thoughts. Also, by being a good friend, I can
help people spread friendship, and find peace in their hearts. I am a peacemaker when I
help those who are less fortunate than myself. I have talked, listened and even tap danced
to make their hearts sing.Peace is "life" in ourselves. Let it flow from your
heart. It is love, not hate. I can help people feel peace from their head to their toes,
and have it felt all over the universe. Let the light of peace fill your heart and mind as
it has mine. Remember, peace is possible night and day.
Rebecca Elizabeth Wilson, 5th Grade, (Age 10)
St. Marks Academy, Cocoa, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Rosemarie Gehm

I am a peacemaker when I am an intermediary, I give suggestions, and when I protest in
a peaceful march. I think these actions will help bring peace to the Earth. I am an
intermediary when I stop disagreements. Also, I am an intermediary when I bring friends
back together after fights. Next, giving suggestions helps communities and citizens do
what is best for their surroundings. Also, this can help resolve disagreements between two
different people. Finally, when I join a peaceful march, I can stop wars and fighting. It
is important to keep countries from fighting so that they can have a peaceful community.
In conclusion, there are many "actions" one can take, to make the world mare
peaceful. I think that if we come together as one, we can form world peace. I hope you
will participate in activities such as the ones listed. You will be helping yourself and
others.
Jad Matuk, 6th Grade, (Age 11)
St. Marks Academy, Cocoa, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Gehm

Find Your Way to Peacemaking
When I think about fighting, first I say to myself, "Am I being a
peacemaker?" I am a peacemaker when I solve arguments by talking them out with the
other person and not my fighting with the him. When I settle disagreements by talking, I
am a peacemaker. By not fighting, I do not create bigger problems where someone could get
hurt. This is a big step towards peacemaking! I am also a peacemaker when I help people
that are in disputes about things they dont know how to settle. Arbitrating is a
good way to be a peacemaker in two ways: you help people, and you feel good inside of your
heart. I am a peacemaker in many ways! I am a peacemaker because I dont use any type
of weapon; I simply use my brain and my mouth to make peace. I am a peacemaker always.
Jonathan Walters, 7th Grade (Age 12)
Bay Point Middle School, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Brown

Im a peacemaker when I help solve all the arguments around me. I am a peacemaker
when I help people be nice to one another. As the Bible says, "Love one another as I
have loved you." I am a peacemaker when I help solve problems. As a wise peacemaker
once said, "The world will be full of war until we make peace with ourselves."
If I could make just one wish I would wish that the world would be at peace with all. If
this were my world I would give everybody a home, food, and everything they need to live.
I am a peacemaker when I help the poor. I am a peacemaker when I donate money to the poor
and to shelters. I am a peacemaker when I find a way to help save a person or a child.
Tony Hodges, 4th Grade, (Age 10)
Green Valley School, New Albany, IN
Teacher: Mrs Simms

I am a peacemaker when I think before I act. When I have control, because without
control I would think badly about everything that I do and act immature around others.
Im a peacemaker when I achieve my goals in school, sports, and vocal activities.
Im a peacemaker when I try to talk out my problems instead of causing them. When
people talk behind my back, I feel frustrated. All it takes is a little control. For me to
be a peacemaker, it takes patience, time and effort. Its like a field of flowers,
just because twelve go bad, doesnt mean the whole field is bad. Just let them grow
back happier, healthier, and stronger. What it takes for me to be a peacemaker is to try
to be who I am, not to change. I never want to change who I am. Im a peacemaker when
I am ME!
Heather Rosensteel, 8th Grade, (Age 15)
Riviera Middle School, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Heather Buchholz

I am a peacemaker when I resolve problems among my friends at school and at home. I
often explain that we are all created by God and we should love each other the way he
loves us. We may look different from each other but we are all bonded together by common
things. I believe that each person has the ability to be a peacemaker. In some schools
students are afraid to be called a peacemaker because they fear that they will be
conceived as being weak. I have built a defense around me that cannot be shaken by
peer-pressure. If I see a friend being laughed at or being pushed around, I speak up. I
let the person who is acting mean know that such acts are not acceptable. We must support
each other, not hurt each other. I know that the World is large and I cannot help everyone
but in my corner of the World I will make a difference. A difference in the way I treat
people--I strive to adhere to the golden rule: to treat people the way I want to be
treated. I get a wonderful feeling whenever I say a kind word to someone; whenever I do an
act of kindness. Just to see the joy on someones face whenever I extend kindness to
them is more than enough compensation.
Simone Hunt, 8th Grade, (Age 13)
Coral Springs Middle School, Coral Springs, FL
Teacher: Aranguiz

When I think of peace, I think of quietness and happiness. It just makes me feel good
inside. It makes me feel like a peacemaker. I know that I am a peacemaker when I tell
people that I do not want to argue or fight. Also when I talk calmly and gently when
people are getting on my nerves and are yelling at me. Or I just walk away to calm that
person down. First of all, I always tell people that I do not want to argue or go to war.
For example, just the other day, my brother got my bicycle all muddy. Furious, I made
fists as I felt my anger build, then I opened up my fists and said, "I dont
want to fight", and went and washed my bike. In addition, I always talk calmly and
gently when other people are getting on my nerves and are yelling at me. To tell you the
truth, I hate to yell. It hurts my throat. And besides, if I did like yelling, I would
probably need a loudspeaker, I dont have a very big voice yet. Furthermore,
sometimes I just walk away to calm that person down. A lot of times it works, except some
people start yelling at me. So, I just tell them that Im not the arguing type. I
think walking away can be the best thing to do because when you walk away, the other
person stares and eventually walks away too. Most of the time, its great because if
you are losing your voice or you have a sore throat, you can hardly do any talking anyway.
Take my advice, you should try these things yourself to see if they really do work. In
conclusion, the word peace means quietness and happiness to me. Once again, I am a
peacemaker when I tell people I do not want to argue or fight. I am a peacemaker when I
talk calmly and gently to people that are yelling at me and who are getting on my nerves.
And finally, I am a peacemaker when I calm down an angry person by simply walking away.
Chase Adler, 5th Grade (Age 10)
Binks Forest Elementary School, Wellington, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Oliver

I feel great pride when I bring peace to this world. I help children believe that this
land, this world, is a better place to be when peace is brought to it. I am only one out
of all the forty conflict managers from the fifth and sixth in my school. I am in sixth
grade and I have a partner from fifth grade. He helps me out with the conflicts happening
in the yard during recess. We both notice every week that there are less and less problems
occurring. Sometimes I feel extremely bored because there arent that many conflicts
to solve, but thats good! I can also be a peacemaker other times without being on
duty for conflict management, like after school. Some of my friends can start getting
involved in an argument and Ill usually use my experience to help solve it. I love
my job as a conflict manager. I bet if other schools had this program, theyd really
enjoy making peace as much as I do. Now, I hope you judges who are reading this dont
get into a conflict about which essay is best because I really dont want to come
down there to solve it; wait maybe I do because I love my job, dont I?
Talisa Erazo, 6th Grade, (Age 11)
P.S. 20, New York, NY
Teacher: Mr. J. Kerne

Tenth Annual Peace Education Awards (2000-2001)
National Award Winners
For Entries sent by March 1, 2001
Kindergarten through Third Grades
Theme: How I Make a More Peaceful World
I can make the world a more peaceful place by stopping fights, working together, and
being kind. It hurts other people when you are mean and push them around. I also
dont judge people and I talk out problems with my friends. If we love ourselves and
respect others, the world will be more peaceful.
Miranda Marra-Owen, 2nd Grade (Age 7)
Spruce Creek Elementary, Port Orange, FL
Teacher: Ms. Dunning

I can bring peace to my family by doing what my parents say and compromising with my
sister. I can bring peace to my friends by being considerate and kind. I can bring peace
to my community by volunteering to help needy people. I can bring peace to the world.
Matthew Cuccuro, 3rd Grade, (Age 9)
Sweetwater Episcopal Academy, Longwood, FL
Teacher: Becky Jackson

Let me tell you how I can make a peaceful world. I will show people how to
respect other cultures. Watch your mouth when you talk to people. Your words can make
other people mad. Words can hurt.
KeAnthony Byrd, 3rd Grade (Age 9)
Mt. Vernon Elementary, St. Petersburg, FL
Teacher: Dinsdale

I can make a peaceful world by helping others when they need help doing
something. I can make the world peaceful by treting others the way you want to be treted.
I can also respect others so they will respect you. You can make new friends by treting
them nice and careing when they fall down or hurt themselves.
Lauren Hawhee, 2nd Grade, (Age 8)
Mildred Helms, Largo, FL
Teacher: Miss Senkow

Grades 4 - 8
I think I am a peacemaker when I help others. I know how it feels to help someone
because everyday I tutor a little girl in the first grade. She has a hard time reading.
Sometimes I get irritated when she cant figure out a simple word like
"boy". But when I tutor her I remember that Im helping her accomplish
something that will make her feel better about herself. When she gets older I hope she
will pass her gift of reading on to someone else that needs her help. I know I did not
stop a war or anything like that, but I still feel like Im a peacemaker in my own
way.
Ulescia Prince, 6th Grade, (Age 12)
Vance Elementary, Vance, AL
Teacher: Mrs. Passmore

I am a peacemaker when I...help others who are in need, whether it is a friend who
doesnt understand a homework question, or my elderly neighbor who needs help with
her groceries. I am a peacemaker when I collect food and clothing for the homeless and
offer comfort to the sick. I am a peacemaker when I listen to a friend who has a problem
and doesnt think anyone cares. I am a peacemaker when I make my mom laugh after she
has had a stressful day at work and when my dad needs someone to remind him that he will
feel better soon. I am a peacemaker when I represent students in my class in the student
council. I am a peacemaker when Im not afraid to voice my opinion about things that
I feel are wrong or unjust. I am a peacemaker when Im simply ME.
Alexandra Pagliery, 6th Grade (Age 11)
St. Timothy Parish School, Miami, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Sirven

I am a peacemaker when I stop a conflict. You see, when you stop a conflict it makes
people happy because their feelings dont get hurt. Being a peace-maker does not take
much. A smile, a hello, or maybe just a happy message can brighten a persons day.
That is what being a peacemaker is all about. Another way of being a peacemaker does not
have to involve people. If you are in a bad mood, dig deep in your soul for a happy
thought as a farmer digs holes in the soil. You will see it makes you feel peaceful. Being
a peacemaker is the best thing you can be. If you are a peacemaker in front of others they
might become peacemakers too. In doing this, they are making the world a better place for
everyone.
Andrea Alhadari, 6th Grade, (Age 12)
St. Timothy Parish School, Miami, FL
Teacher: Mrs. Sirven

There have been many great peacemakers throughout history. All peacemakers dont
have to be famous. I am a peacemaker in my own way. I am a peacemaker when I refuse to
argue with others. Its only an argument when more than one person wants to argue. I
am also a peacemaker when I dont take sides in others arguments. When people
gossip, I dont repeat what I hear. If I see people ignoring others, I try to be
friends with them, which helps them be friends with one another. To be a peacemaker, I
must be at peace with myself. This means liking myself and not trying to be what others
want me to be, but being what I want me to be. Being a peacemaker is important to me
because it can make my life and other peoples lives better.
Maygan Smitherman, 6th Grade (Age 11)
Vance Elementary, Vance, AL
Teacher: Mrs.Passmore